Imani-Islander69's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vulnerable Dinko]

Nice character design

BracketNeutron responds:

Just saying this is fanart, not an original character of mine. Though considering it's my interpretation on it, I can make sense of it. Thanks for the feedback.

[Watercolour Postcard of a Park]

WOW that looks realistic.

ediblefromage responds:

HA I wouldn't go so far as to say it's realistic, but that's very kind, thank you!

[aijou karen]

Its really good but the wrinkles don't flow with the body pose, girl skirts are usually on their waist so the skirt line is supose to be straight. You have inconstant shading, for instance the breast would have shadows form one to the other,and the arm holding the thing have shadows above and below the arm while the skirt shows nothing despite the shirt being over it, final I can't tell what she is doing her face is not expressive, if she's sad try drawing some tears, or if is not that then maybe tell people in the summary.

michisha responds:

Thank you so much for taking the time to write this review, I appreciate it a lot!! Concerning the skirt, I see what you mean. I didn't realize it was this up on the waist (I think I might have been influenced because I don't wear my skirts that way haha) but I will definitely keep that in mind! I'll try to practice wrinkles and folds on clothes more, I still have a lot of problems with these. :]
Oh and for the face, I think I wanted to go with something like "in pain but expressionless at the same time" and not something too big. I planned to draw some tears at first but this didn't pleased me.
I think I'll try to go with the "painting-like" coloring more in the future, usually I go with the cel-shading way haha
Anyway thank you again!

[skies]

This looks gorgeous and so relaxing.

TheZadek responds:

thanks breh

[Wrath of the Wild - Chapter 1 Pg 4]

This is good and the art style is great but, the green lizard solider is in an uncomfortable pose the legs are too bend for the upper part.

FennecFyre responds:

Grubb (the lizard's species) have somewhat odd proportions, their arms and legs are a bit too short for their bodies, but you do have a valid point about the pose being a little off. Thanks for the feedback!

[Twilight]

I love the simplicity, but the river blends to much in the ground.

Moonlit-Raven responds:

Thanks again!

[The Atrium]

wow you're great at architecture but the lighting is too geometric, you know too much of a define shape.

Moonlit-Raven responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

[Terry, but in Red]

OMG she looks fabulous

Moonlit-Raven responds:

Thank you!!

[A New Beginning]

This looks stunting

Moonlit-Raven responds:

Thanks!

[Lemon Party]

creeptastic.

StephenHutchins responds:

thank you